Gloomy Girl source: http://www.comments20.com the withered flowers trying to look more cheerful by the gloomy girl Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai #751 “Alone” Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading... Author: wingedwind Aku adalah aku yang sebagian aku tahu dan sebagian aku tak tahu. View all posts by wingedwind
Trying is the best word to describe this scene … I like your way of composing haiku. This one is very strong. Reply
I like how the gloom or withered quality is seen as being relative here, and also the word “trying”, which almost adds a fairy tale element to the haiku 🙂 Reply
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Trying is the best word to describe this scene … I like your way of composing haiku. This one is very strong.
I like how the gloom or withered quality is seen as being relative here, and also the word “trying”, which almost adds a fairy tale element to the haiku 🙂
Yes, I like that, very much.
thank you 🙂